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南宁托福写作如何提分

  最近很多首次接触托福考试的小伙伴跟小编聊天的时候,问小编,托福写作如何提分?托福写作怎么提分比较好?等方面的问题,为了帮助大家,小编就来跟大家详细说说吧。

  #01、不使用缩写

  示例:孩子们心理上不太成熟,以至于不能够区分正确和错误的。

  错误:Children are so immature psychologically that they can't distinguish between right and wrong.

  正确:Children are so immature psychologically that they cannot distinguish between right and wrong.

  在规范性写作中,一定要避免缩写,这是美国大学中学术写作的基本要求。因此,can't,don't,doesn't,won't应该替换成cannot,can not,do not,does not,will not.

 #02、规范使用数字

  示例:在游戏过程中,孩子们可以锻炼两种不同的核心能力:计划和管理资源的能力以及双手眼协调能力。

  错误:When playing video games,children could develop 2 crucial skills:planning and resource management skills and hand-eye coordination.

  正确:When playing video games,children could develop two crucial skills:planning and resource management skills and hand-eye coordination.

  在英语写作中,1-10的数字需要“写出来”,而且阿拉伯数字不能用在句子的开头。

  #03、关于数量的表达

  示例:学生们有很多种形式获得教授们的鼓励

  错误:Encouragement that students receive from their professors can take a lot of forms.

  正确:Encouragement that students receive from their professors can take many forms.

  在写作中,a lot of/lots of表示为“许多”,较为不正式,通常使用much或many等表示。

 #04、注意语态

  示例:人们对于学前教育对孩子学术成绩和个人发展的影响十分关注。

  错误:Great attention has been paid to the influence of pre-school education on a child's academic achievements and personal development.

  正确:Parents are paying growing attention to the influence of pre-school education on a child's academic achievements and personal development.

  在写作中,用“主动语态”代替“被动语态”。

 #05、删除不必要的词

  示例:曼德拉从未停止过种族平等运动的抗争,虽然他曾入狱。

  错误:Mandela never stopped camaigning for racial equality,despite the fact he was incarcerated.

  正确:Mandela never stopped camaigning for racial equality,despite of his incarcerated.

  在写作中,删除不必要的词,如几乎所有的fact,包括:owing to the fact that...,in speite of the fact that...,call your attention to the fact that...,I was unaware of the fact that...等。